Ailam Remard

Chapter Three “Come on, doll!” one of them whispered very close to her ear. His breath was warm and smelt of stale liquor. She squirmed away. It was like he ...

QUOTE: To try take the safest way. END QUOTE This should be more like "Try to take the safest way" or "To try to take the safest way" or "You/I ...

QUOTE: You get ahead three steps ahead of me. END QUOTE Take out the extra ahead. So instead of "You get ahead three steps ahaed of me" it should be ...

Yes, I agree, poems don't have to rhyme and when you try and make them rhyme, it just sounds very forced. Also the last line "Happy." I didn't get it. ...

Still, your story makes me depressed! It's sorta, um, I can't explain, you know? Not that it's horrible! It's WONDERFUL for people who like to read this kind of stuff. ...

CUTE! I love Twilight. I love how Alice and Jasper's thoughts were. It's so sad about jacob though, I really would pick him over Edward.

From the author: It's a short chapter but it starts to introduce her fear and why having this baby will be so hard. Chapter Two Her feet punded on the ...

Screaming. Dying echoes of screaming, filling her head with long lost, painful memories of misery and havoc. After the last screams had died out, cold air playing with her hair, ...

I really don't know what I intend to do with it. Sometimes I just get inspired and write down something that I have no idea what to do with. This ...

yes, i know. my writing really sucks. i just post it on here because, well really i don't know why i post it on here.....

i hope this isn't YOUR suicide letter cuz you're too cool and i'm sure everyone would miss you a lot :) -ailam

Knock-down, Drag-out By Ailam Remard It all started with a shower curtain and an unflushed, clogged toilet. A shower curtain I could have fixed, a toilet I could have flushed. ...

:( sad! But you know what's funny? I was writing a poem where the main line was "So long ago". Lol

I didn't quite get it. Like was the plane crashing, was he talking about killing himslef, or just being really depressing??

I used to feel like that about a boy. His name was Keegan, and even though we carpooled together to choir, he never even knew I was alive.